Nowadays, some people may hobeld thieve opin puttiong that pugreat dea lot of pressure on their children to succeed, butwhereas others have ado negaotive. attitude.aAs far as I am concerned, I diso not agree thatin putting too much pressure on children. My arguments for this point are listed as follows.:

First reason in this point is,(1) pParents must understand their children's interests and what's makes them happy, soand in mostany cases, you can see that the children who thsey parents put tdo much pressure theym - are unot happy ,and but tharey just used to doa sometrict routine.The

second reason is, s (2)Sometimes, children conchavep other ideas about whanot thery want to field,o but their parents jushave other bidecause tsuchey as wanting theirm childrento being a doctor ian future,d thpey forcsuade them to study hard.

(3) The reason why parents doing this to their children is, they want to see successful of their children in future on thbeir fisuccessfuld owhether any kindt ofbe sport or, music andor other influential lecadreers.o On the other hand, they have done a mistake in the past and they don't want their children do the same mistake.on the opposite way, they make a good decision ands they want their children to make the same decision.
In conclusion, for the reason
s mentioned above, parents usually try to provide their children with the best of everythings, but they musthould pay attention to their intperestonal dreams.It iParents aneed to simuplicity pofrt their childrefin's aspirations thatnd puint lots of peressure its; not a good way to being successful, buict they mustir supportwn thdreams ionto their concepts anhild interestsn.

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