Topic sentence: The person I admire most is my best friend.
A. Family
• Gives to me
- Encourages me to study medicine in Canada, or anyplace.
- Always be with me and listen.
B. Determined
• Education
- works in a company as Satellite Engineer and he has scholarship at the same time.
- he continue his education
C. Helpful
• With me
- assist me in IELTS test, and anything I want.
• The Saudi Students in Vancouver
- who need help to attend at the institute or the collage.
Concluding point
• He is the sunshine of my life.
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