The Rodriguez's manor was quiet as they lay down to rest. Smoke clouded the sky, as the youngest's cough inhaling was too much. "Mommy!", she screamsed, running to the door., Kknocking on the door loudly, hoping someone would get her out. "I'm sorry, but this has to be done", Mrs. Rodriguez's said, boarding up the door as tears fell down her face. Her screams were loud, as Mrs. Rodriguez's pushed her way out of the house. Fighting to breathe, the handle bar slipped out of her hand as she fell forward., Hhitting her head, against the glass table.

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