Our School 'Charity fFun dDay'

Rais
eding money for charity is good and noble. What happens when we combine raiseing money and a festival? Of course,
we had fun and raised a lot of money. This year's Charity Fun Day was brilliant and our organisation raised $16 ,000 $ for charity. We
did this
, while listening to several students bands, enjoying vder nlice taiousting homemade food and watching a football match.

We arrived early
, the birds were singing and the weather was very good. There were a lot of people.T and this year the music
was fantastic.
FWhen the festiwval was over, we had a football match. This match was were amazing, because hisour team won the match.!

There are two things I would suggest to change next year. First
ly, the plaoceation. This year, there were thousands of people and
lack
not enofugh splace.There; it was crowded and stifling. Secondly, there were not enough attractions for small children and they were bored.

I
tf you are looking for very good day out try cthe Charity fFun dDay next year. You won't be diasappointed.!

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