Outside it was pitch black, and Crane Hall was on fire. Macie, Mic, and Jade stood outside watching in disbelief as the building lit up in flames. Leonard, Will, and Eugene rushed over to the girls out of breath, “dDo you know what happened? Do you know anything?”, they all shouted in synchronization. “Why would we know anything?”, Macie expressed in an annoyed way and rolled her eyes. “Maybe you was out-, Leonard expressed but couldn’t finish what he was saying before something that looked like a ninja star pierced Will’s head. Will instantly fell to the ground he stood upon just seconds ago. Everyone’s eyes got big and they all started to breathe heavily. Everyone turned around slowly to try to see who threw the star. They could not see anyone or anything, it was pitch black, and smoke and flames filled up the night sky. “We need to get back in the dorms and call for help,".

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