Hi Jessica!

I'm writing to you to tell about themy last troaveld by catr.
I
ip was going the focar; a short trip with my family. wWhen we were on the motorway, we saw thean accident.th; one car had hit another car from the opposite direction. My dad stopped the car and my mom called for the emergency. I feel horrible, because I thought that someone ishad died. tThe ambulance and the fire engine comarrivesd so fastquickly (3-5minutes). and I saw the alivt the people were alive. I pefeledt better, but today I still feel fear. Howevn the r,oad.

I know that I clouldn't switneess that everyis kinday, sof shappeening this every day; it isn't for me.

xxx,
Nicolas

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