Dear diaryDiary,
I’ve
I’d
been calling out to Jamal, almost hystericalhysterically, for the last five minutes, whilst Yusuf iswas trying to calm me down. I think I can hear him calling atto me, while he comes up the hill...

“Bibi, Bibi! ...what happened!?” Jamal said.

“I’ve stepped on this mine, and I don’t know what to do.”

I can hear Yusuf saying that I’ll be alright, but I’m still scared out of my mind.

Jamal said, “I’ll slip my foot onto the mine, whilst you slip your foot off, Bibi, without the mine plate springing up,” Jamal said.

“NO,NO,NO!. You are not risking your life for mine, Jamal,BibiI said.

Jamal said that he would be alall right an...[INCOMPLETE]

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