Thanks for your last message. Congratulations on getting tointo your dream university. I know that you've worked hard for it. I've always believed in you. I hope you'll like it there.

I can understand your parents' concerns.
You are still young and your parents are afraid for you. A lonely trip to a foreign country can be dangerous.


Try to get along with your parents. Maybe they'll agree on a trip if you go with a trusted person. Explain to them how important this trip is for you.

I recently took part in sports competitions. My team played basketball. The competition took place in my school. Our team took the second place.

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