Recently, a fatal virus called Corona hascoronavirus was created in China and spread to the world. HeIt causes bodylung problems and can even kill. The government has decided to adopt laws and guidelines to be followed to prevent the virus from spreading and to makemaking matters worse. I disagree with the government's policy against the Coronacoronavirus.
First,
Learninglearning from home deteriorates the educational statusexperience of students. While we stay at home, we create gapsgaps are created in the school material that we had to study at school. Moreover, after the situation calms down, we will have to work hard to completelearn the missing information and waste our time. For example, there are already concerns that we will have to go to school during the summer vacation for a month to study.
Secondly, staying at homes increases the feeling of loneliness.
Other peoplePeople who are in their homes alone, following the instructions, cannot go to visit their familyfamilies or friends. Moreover, theThese lonely people may havedevelop illnesses due to loneliness, such as being depressed or having mental health problems that can adversely affect themhave adverse effects.
In conclusion, I believe that laws have both disadvantages and advantages. Even though I think the government did not think at the time for the benefit of others and they could try to be more considerate. For those reasons I do not agree with the government's policy against the
Corona viruscoronavirus.

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