Hi Claire,
How are you? I miss you, I haven’t see (SEEN)seen you since school ended. Now I’m in Bari, at the moment. Where are you? Are your holidays over? How were (WAS)yourwas your holiday? I have to tell you, a lot of things that happened this summer, but not totoo much to dwell muchon, I’ll tell you here about my perfect vacation. This summer I was in Lecce, with my best friend. In, in a village. ThereLuckily the weather luckily, (no comma) was beautiful, there was sun every day. In the village (comma) there were three swimming pools: one for children, one with a jacuzzi, and another bigger, where we were always staying. At 4 pm, every day, we were given appointment in the big pool to play volleyballone where we spent most of our time, and we had a lot of fun, in fact then, we only got out of the water at 8 pm. In the village we also met other boys of our age, withwho we are now speak throughin contact with on WhatsApp. It was the most beautiful vacation I’ve ever had, I’m curious to hear abouthow your holiday as it went.

See you soon
,

Melissa

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