Dear Mr. Smith,
I am writing in response to an advertisement I saw for a job at your summer camp in my school magazine. I would also like to know how much
do you pay?the job pays.
Firstly, it says in the advertisement that the work would be done in Cercedilla, a village in Madrid, throughout July.
Moreover, your advert mentions that accommodation for camping and food is paid for by you. Could you tell me if the monitors are staying on their own or with the children?
Additionally, I want to
say totell you about my qualities to deserve this job. I have studied for three years of early childhood education; I have been working as a babysitter for a year, and this last year, I started working in a state school as a teacher of children five years old. I also gave a three-month course on first aid.
Finally, I have a question about the planning
,. Will we only stay in Cercedilla, or someday will we go to another place?
In conclusion, I think that I can be good at this job, and I am willing to do whatever you need.
I am very interested in this job.
I look forward to hearing from you.
Yours sincerely,
Esmeralda Salas

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