Thank you very much for your letter,. I realize thathow competitive entry to the MIT Sloan School of Management is and thus I am grateful for beingto be placed on your wait list.

I express my sincere gratitude for the opportunity to apply to the MIT Sloan Fellows program, visit the campus
, and meet truly impressive students from the current MIT Sloan Fellows class.

This visit reinforced my belief that MIT Sloan Fellows is the best program for me to grow as a leader
, and should I be given this opportunity, I shall immediately come to join the MIT Sloan School of Management.

While I am evaluating
on what kind of additional information I might provide it, I will be happy to respond to any questions regarding my application or current status.

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