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Dear Sir/madamSir/Madam,
I’m writing regarding our
contract of my mobile phone contract, which has changed without letting me knowour knowledge.
Last week, I received an email with some information concerning my mobile plan. As a result, now I have to pay ten percent more than I used to
pay. I have always had problems with your service.....

Matériel informatique utilisé : Une machine virtuelle sous Windows 10 ainsi que le logiciel de prise en main à distance AnyDesk.
RésumerRésumé de l’installation : J’ai installé AnyDesk sur le PC de prise en main via la VM puis sur mon téléphone personnel.
Photos ci-joint pour le contrôle du PC via le smart
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I am a girl from a small village in Haiti who migrated to the United States. in hopes of obtaining a better education. I’ve always valued getting an education. It came naturally to me since it was difficult to obtain one in Haiti. My family often encountered difficulties in funding my education as Ha.....

Good evening, my name is Beatrice Pezzini,. I am 17 years old, and I am aan 11th grade student at an architecture high school in Italy, in 11th grade, in. In September I have towill enter the 12th grade, but up until the 10th grade I studied in different countries, so. So this year I had difficulties with the Italian language, whi.....

Dear K,

It was a pleasure to meet you on the phone.
The week after next, I am tight and on the road a lot.


IIn the meantime, I propose to have a conversation via Teams in the meantime, to get to know each other better, then I am looking for the opportunity to see you as soon as possible after your onboarding, in .....

Many people say that to celebrate birthdays is not wise and they, their reason being that an increase in your age every year reduces a year from your life. One may have no reason to disagree with the justification as far as someone's age is concerned but still, there is something that can be followed beside .....

Hello! I have a few questions about the test that we took a few days ago, because I was looking over my test with a few friends, and I realized that even though we had given the same answers, I got them incorrect, and they didn't. I worked really hard and studied reallyvery hard, and the end result was no.....

Hello!
My name is Anastasiya
,. I’m a Ukrainian girl who’s looking for a safe place in England.

I’m a dental technician
, but I worked in Kyiv for 2 years as a business manager.
I always wanted to continue my studies as a Dentist
, but the war ruined everything.
I don't know if I will have the chance
.....

Moreover, my father works as a representative in the fashion trade while my mother has always been a wife-house for taking care of me and my three brothers. Like many other families, I am aware of the sacrifices my parents made (and still make) for me and my brothers allowing us to study in Israel a.....

In the story, the reason towardsbehind God’s choice to “cleanse the earth” with the flood was becauseis the corruption in the world was corrupted and people “arebeing "forbidden to do evil” (Hawkswell). LikeAs we see, God punishes the people for sinning by bringing about a flood. However, God allowedallows Noah to live because “Noah found grace .....

Joan 11, 2852, où les humains dépendaient des robots pour accomplir leurs tâches quotidiennes, et le robot était contrôlé par l'esclave et sa compagnie était contrôlée à distance, et la compagnie s'appelait la vie de l'asthme.
Chaque famille choisissait un nom pour son propre robot, car c'était une
.....

We can put the two films:, The Great Gatsby and The Hate You Give, into perspective. First of all, the surroundings of the films, "The Hate You Give," and "The Great Gatsby", are similar. That is to say, they are both split and contain an inner conflict. Moreover, we see a divide in society, based on .....

As shown above, Noah’s arkArk and the story of Gilgamesh depict a higher presence and how evil can affect the world. This emphasizes that we must be obedient and be good, despite the ridicule of others. If we obeyare obedient and be good in the world, we will be saved from our own flood, while the wicked people .....

As we look into other stories, we seem to see that Utnapishtim is more similar to the bibleBible's version of the flood. Utnapishtim had become immortal after building a ship that he went on during a flood. In the story Utnapishtim we see that a Godgod tells Gilgamesh about the flood. In the beginning, the .....

We had a customer who came on 06-05-22 at 11:30 Pmp.m. I werewas alone and she was carryinghad a gift voucher from rivoli watch ,Rivoli watches. She asked to getfor an optical frame with an optician lens, but she needsneeded to do an eye test. I showed her many frames and advicedadvised her to buy a Gucci frame sheone. She paid 940 AED invoice(invoice number : 00545.....

We can analyze that the animal species were chosen. As many can see, Noah had selected the animals that were at the time believed to be “prime type” “thus ensuring the post-flood recreation of multiple species through cross-breeding, and through mutations due to the various climates and biological e.....

The 7 COMMANDMENTS and the song Beast of England were the most valuable in the farm at the beginning of the novel; Beast was sung roughly 6 or 7 times a day because it was considered the anthem of Animal Farm, a theory adopted by the animals and termed "Animalism." Animals are to be completely disti.....

Dear Mr. Smith,
I am writing in response to an advertisement I saw for a job at your summer camp in my school magazine. I would also like to know how much do you pay?

Firstly, it says in the advertisement that the work would be done in Cercedilla, a village in Madrid, throughout July.

Moreov
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Dear Mr. Smith,
I am writing in response to an advertisement I saw for a job at your summer camp in my school magazine. I would also like to know how much
do you pay?the job pays.
Firstly, it says in the advertisement that the work would be done in Cercedilla, a village in Madrid, throughout July.
Moreover, y
.....

In the Bible, people were persistent in doingpersistently did wrong. “TheThe story of Noah and his Ark, recounted in the Christian Bible in Genesis 6–9”6–9 (Goh), talks aboutexplains how God grantinggranted Noah and his family the ability to survive through thethe flood. Humans have been seen to roam the earthEarth for many years. However, evil things have always c.....

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